Day 5

Challenge this Fifth Day
is to write a cinquain!!


Hearing 

you Cry Tonight

Because we’re Far Apart

Should be Here Happily The

With Me


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Originally written 6-14-1983
From much longer poem

2 Responses

  1. Thank you for stopping by my LJ today to read my cinquain. I like that you took on the challenge of telling a story about a relationship, which is always difficult for such a short form!

  2. Thanks for this poem of parting and sadness and longing. Thanks for your comment on my blog.

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